Thesis

= Thesis﻿  =

__Category I: Germany's Aggression__

 * ====They declared war on alot of countries.====
 * They tried to get other countries to join the war.
 * They declared war on Russia just because the Russian army was mobilizing.

Category II; How Germany Used its Power


 * They used it to destroy other countries
 * They used it to make countries feel inferior.
 * They used it to expand the war over different countries by persuading and forcing.

Category III: Germany' War Decisions
 * They invaded Belgium.[[image:http://www.historyplace.com/worldwar2/ww2-pix/versailles.jpg width="220" height="130" align="right"]]
 * Declared war on France just for being an ally.
 * The Zimmerman letter.

__Thesis__ The Treaty of Versailles was justified because Germany deserved the consequences that the treaty gave them. Their aggression, their power, and their war decisions killed a large amount of people, and helped the war grow in size. Germany didn't think about who and what in Europe they would effect by their actions. They also used theri power inapropriatly and immaturely. They expanded the war over multiple countries just by attacking other countries and persuading other countries to join the war. If Germany wasn't involved in WWI it would not have been as bad.

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Thesis and organization are good! You need to re-think your second category. It is not so much that Germany was powerful but rather what they did with that power. You address that in your German aggression category. Otherwise, the other 2 categories look good. Collaborate and re-create your thesis statement. 23/25